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Thursday, 1 August 2019

Eating Junk food- By Mele'ana

Learning Intention- W.A.L.T- write a Persuasive writing.
Success Criteria-I know I am when I can persuade my reader about my story.



I disagree that eating junk food is good for us, because you could get rotten teeth and even go to the dentist. Junk food has lots of sugar and salt, and they affect your teeth and it will start to hurt. It has no vitamins, so it will just make your body rotten. You even might get diabetes from eating lots of Junk food. Fruit and vegetables are way better than Junk food.













R.E. activities-By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-W.A.L.T-carry out the church mission of service to people.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can tell how people in the parish carry out the church's mission of service.

1) People are serving others by donating food to the poor.

2) People are serving others by visiting and cheering up the sick.

3) People are serving others by cheering up the lonely and helping the homeless

4) People are serving others by giving food to the hungry.

Church - ( By Mele'ana )

Learning Intention-W.A.L- the mission of Jesus.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can tell the mission of Jesus.

1) Jesus' mission is the same as the mission of the church today.

2) The mission of Jesus was to bring about what God wants for 
     all people.

3) The work Jesus did started the building of God's kingdom           on earth.

4) God wants people to become Holy by cooperating with God's
     grace.

5) People become holy through God's grace which is God's 
    presence and action in them.

Shellfish - Cockles- ( By Mele'ana )

Learning Intention-W.A.L.T-write an argument.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can give my idea to the argument.

What are Cockles?
A Cockle is an edible, marine mollusc. 
Many small bivalves are loosely called Cockles, true cockles are species in the family of Cardiidae.


Why are cockles disappearing?
Cockles are disappearing because people are greedy and taking big sackfuls of Cockles. The take limit has been in place for a few years and people are braking it.

What can we do about it?
We could put up signs that say " 20 Cockles per person" and watch out if people ignore and take more. If they ignore, then we could sew them for $2,000. Or we could put it on the news telling New Zealand the limit or just put it on google for people to read. 





Koi carp are pests-By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-W.A.L.T-write an argument.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can give my idea to the argument.

What is Koi carp?
Koi are coloured varieties of common carp. Koi carp belongs to the family of Cyprinidae in Japan. Most Koi carp are red, black, white and blue.

I disagree that Koi carp are pets because they damage our lakes and out rivers. Koi carp also take other fish food, so the fish will die. It also affects native fish habitats and also plant species. Koi carp feed on anything, so when it's hungry it will kill all plants, fish and fish eggs.




Red riding hood visits Saint Patricks school-By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-W.A.L.T-write a narrative story.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use fulls stops, capital letters, correct spelling and in paragraph form.

Once upon a time there lived a Beautiful young girl named little red riding hood. She lived in a really big house near Panmure basin with her dad.

One day her dad said "I'm sending you to a school". Little red riding hood was shocked she didn't know what a school was because when she was small she was home schooled, so she never went to kindergarten or primary. She wanted to see what school was like, so she visited St Patricks school. She visited a class and looked around.

She liked school, so she stayed in St Patricks school. She made heaps of friends and she loved it.

Warsaw-By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-W.A.L.T-write a narrative story.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use full stops, Capital letter, correct spelling and in paragraph form.

Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous, bright, green and purple fire breathing dragon named "Warsaw". He was lonely because he was ugly and he had no friends. People think he was scary. 

Warsaw went out for a fly, then he saw some people and they saw him, they all ran away. The thing was that Warsaw had big horns on top of his head, thats why people were scared of him, Warsaw felt sad that they kept running away. Until one day they called animal control and warned them that he was a dragon. The animal Control came and kid napped him in a big cage and left him in the forest with a lock, Warsaw started to scream and breath fire in the air. A girl named Bat girl came with her cousin Batman and they rescued him, but it took an hour because the cage was made out of a big texture. She saved him and took him to safety.

They both became friends and played lots of games together. Warsaw was really happy that he had a new best friend. One day Warsaw went to Bat girl's house to see lots of people, but it was full heroes. They didn't know that Warsaw was a dragon, they thought he was human. Warsaw walked through the door and everyone screamed, but then they all got used to Warsaw. So Bat girl was really happy that they were all friends. The next day Warsaw made many more friends.