Thursday, 1 August 2019

Eating Junk food- By Mele'ana

Learning Intention- W.A.L.T- write a Persuasive writing.
Success Criteria-I know I am when I can persuade my reader about my story.

I disagree that eating junk food is good for us, because you could get rotten teeth and even go to the dentist. Junk food has lots of sugar and salt, and they affect your teeth and it will start to hurt. It has no vitamins, so it will just make your body rotten. You even might get diabetes from eating lots of Junk food. Fruit and vegetables are way better than Junk food.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora, ko Hannah taku ingoa, nō te kura o Karoro ahau.
    Hi Meleana this is a really good blog post. The part that stood out the most to me was when you said that junk food makes your body rotten, I also agree with you. I like that you have written a good paragraph and that the sentence starters vary.

    What kind of healthy food do you like to eat? The facts that you used very really good easy to understand. I agree with you that there are not many vitamins in junk food and that we shouldn't eat to much of it.

    Next time check your work before you post it. Some of the sentences do not make sense. Also junk food does not need a capital unless you are starting a sentence.

    Kind Regards Hannah