Warsaw-By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-W.A.L.T-write a narrative story.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use full stops, Capital letter, correct spelling and in paragraph form.

Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous, bright, green and purple fire breathing dragon named "Warsaw". He was lonely because he was ugly and he had no friends. People think he was scary. 

Warsaw went out for a fly, then he saw some people and they saw him, they all ran away. The thing was that Warsaw had big horns on top of his head, thats why people were scared of him, Warsaw felt sad that they kept running away. Until one day they called animal control and warned them that he was a dragon. The animal Control came and kid napped him in a big cage and left him in the forest with a lock, Warsaw started to scream and breath fire in the air. A girl named Bat girl came with her cousin Batman and they rescued him, but it took an hour because the cage was made out of a big texture. She saved him and took him to safety.

They both became friends and played lots of games together. Warsaw was really happy that he had a new best friend. One day Warsaw went to Bat girl's house to see lots of people, but it was full heroes. They didn't know that Warsaw was a dragon, they thought he was human. Warsaw walked through the door and everyone screamed, but then they all got used to Warsaw. So Bat girl was really happy that they were all friends. The next day Warsaw made many more friends.







  

Harm the Rat -By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-We are learning to write a narrative story.

Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use capital letters, full stops, correct spelling and in paragraph form.

Along time ago, back in the 1900's, in America there lived a rat named Harm. She was grey, white, very small, fat and has anger issues. 

One day she walked through the field and found lots of chocolate bars stacked  up in a tree. Just as she went through  the hole of the tree, a strange old rat stopped her and said " These are my chocolate bars, get lost ". Harm tried to convince the strange, old rat to share.

Finally he agreed and said" I'll share 2  bars, but don't come back ever again ". Harm answered " OK ". The strange, old rat gave her 2 chocolate bars and  Harm went back home, quietly and safely.

Pistol the killer whale-By Mele'ana

Learning Intention-We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using full stops and  paragraphs.

Pistol the killer whale

Pistol the killer whale was big, black, very mean and scary.

One day he swam straight into the Pacific Ocean and was captured by fishermen. Everyone in his family cried because they thought that he was dead. It was a horrible night looking in the light of Pistol's funeral.

Pistol's little sister felt some strange wave. She knew her big brother was still in the Ocean. She looked and looked and found Pistol still stuck in the net. She bite the sticky, large, strong net with her teeth and made a big hole for Pistol to escape.

Pistol and his little sister went to the big black and white undersea cave and started to celebrate because Pistol was still alive.