Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using full stops and paragraphs.
Pistol the killer whale
Pistol the killer whale was big, black, very mean and scary.
One day he swam straight into the Pacific Ocean and was captured by fishermen. Everyone in his family cried because they thought that he was dead. It was a horrible night looking in the light of Pistol's funeral.
Pistol's little sister felt some strange wave. She knew her big brother was still in the Ocean. She looked and looked and found Pistol still stuck in the net. She bite the sticky, large, strong net with her teeth and made a big hole for Pistol to escape.
Pistol and his little sister went to the big black and white undersea cave and started to celebrate because Pistol was still alive.
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