Learning Intention-We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria-i know I am successful when I can write a recount about myself.
All about me
Hello! My name is Mele'ana. My birthday is on September 2008. I grew up in Auckland, Panmure. I have 2 brothers . My favourite colour is blue. I love maths and reading. My favourite food and drink is raspberry and Burger king.
I really like playing netball, gymnastics and being a goalie in soccer. I like reading Ronald Dahl books because they are interesting. I don't like reading owl diary's because they have baby words, I rather read chapters. I really don't like beans, they make me vomit. I don't like playing tag because when I run I trip.
My friends are Augustine, Yesha, Asinate, Tyrah, Giselle, Ellma, Lolenese, Paul and Lupe.
Monday 20 August 2018
Thursday 9 August 2018
Harm the Rat -By Mele'ana
Learning Intention-We are learning to write a narrative story.
One day she walked through the field and found lots of chocolate bars stacked up in a tree. Just as she went through the hole of the tree, a strange old rat stopped her and said " These are my chocolate bars, get lost ". Harm tried to convince the strange, old rat to share.
Finally he agreed and said" I'll share 2 bars, but don't come back ever again ". Harm answered " OK ". The strange, old rat gave her 2 chocolate bars and Harm went back home, quietly and safely.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can use capital letters, full stops, correct spelling and in paragraph form.
Along time ago, back in the 1900's, in America there lived a rat named Harm. She was grey, white, very small, fat and has anger issues.
One day she walked through the field and found lots of chocolate bars stacked up in a tree. Just as she went through the hole of the tree, a strange old rat stopped her and said " These are my chocolate bars, get lost ". Harm tried to convince the strange, old rat to share.Finally he agreed and said" I'll share 2 bars, but don't come back ever again ". Harm answered " OK ". The strange, old rat gave her 2 chocolate bars and Harm went back home, quietly and safely.
Thursday 2 August 2018
Pistol the killer whale-By Mele'ana
Learning Intention-We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using full stops and paragraphs.
Pistol the killer whale
Pistol the killer whale was big, black, very mean and scary.
One day he swam straight into the Pacific Ocean and was captured by fishermen. Everyone in his family cried because they thought that he was dead. It was a horrible night looking in the light of Pistol's funeral.
Pistol's little sister felt some strange wave. She knew her big brother was still in the Ocean. She looked and looked and found Pistol still stuck in the net. She bite the sticky, large, strong net with her teeth and made a big hole for Pistol to escape.
Pistol and his little sister went to the big black and white undersea cave and started to celebrate because Pistol was still alive.
Success Criteria-I know I am successful when I can write a narrative story using full stops and paragraphs.
Pistol the killer whale
Pistol the killer whale was big, black, very mean and scary.
One day he swam straight into the Pacific Ocean and was captured by fishermen. Everyone in his family cried because they thought that he was dead. It was a horrible night looking in the light of Pistol's funeral.
Pistol's little sister felt some strange wave. She knew her big brother was still in the Ocean. She looked and looked and found Pistol still stuck in the net. She bite the sticky, large, strong net with her teeth and made a big hole for Pistol to escape.
Pistol and his little sister went to the big black and white undersea cave and started to celebrate because Pistol was still alive.
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